I Wondered About You Today
by Lydia Daffenberg
I wondered about you today--
What you were doing
What you were thinking and saying
(Did you see that star over there? We're on the same hemisphere, you know . . .)
If your thoughts lead you over a river,
Through a dense forest or glen; and,
What you were thinking of just then
(Of our walks and talks?)
When the light flashed a twinkle my way suggesting
It was you saying, "Hey."
I wonder what you were doing then, today,
When I wondered about you that way . . .
When you were overhead in the trees,
Peering down at me, or there in the flicker of the fire, there beside?
I grow tired and retire for the night, the embers decide to expire, finally.
I'm free. Sub-Thoughts roam.
I float about and find you (and me) at home amidst my quandries--
We're always questioning
But, overall, complete.
I wondered about you today.
I know down deep you wonder, too.
Who wouldn't, ey?
3 Comments:
Perfect. Just great. I mean truly.
I agree. This is great. I love the interior rhyme, especially, "I grow tired and retire for the night, the embers decide to expire, finally." Smooth rhythm, solid flow, and I like what it's about. ;)
Hey there girl,
That's some truly beautiful poetry.
The images your words invoke are absolutely stunning.
Thank you and keep writing.
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