On Being Zelda
by Lydia Daffenberg
I've become the Zelda I've never wanted to be
He's become, who would have guessed, "The Great Gatsby"
I start, you finish
Numbers too large to keep score
If I wasn't dead already, I'd probably die some more
Instead I just click off.
I know, you scoff . . .
But your self-doubt speaks:
"What do you think of this?
How does that read?
Does this represent me?"
"It's great, what can I say,
I'm Zelda and your Gatsby."
Go ahead, take it away.
2 Comments:
What do I say. . . ? Wow! You really reached deep for this one and it payed off. What a great poem! I love the rhythm, the rhyme, and probably some other rh- words that I can't think of. I hope the literary crowd catches this one, they'll love it.
aw you guys!
First of all me likey, second of all, Is this poem like a dream, one in which you are all the players and parts? Third, my OCD is calling me to list Rh words
rhinocerous, rhizome, Rhea, rhinoplasty, rhizoctonia, rhabdom, rhubarb, Rhode Island, oh stop....
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